Ashlyn is super annoying. From the beginning, she’s basically admitting that there’s no spark/connection with Logan anymore, and she feels more for Colt in the first two moments she speaks to him than she ever did for Logan in their years long relationship. Also, she’s completely ignoring the red flags, but still wants to make it work with Logan because she prides herself on being loyal. Like just break up with him, you’re not emotionally invested in him. (Also her thinking about Colt while having sex with Logan… emotional cheating right there). i hated the fmc, why is ashlyn a fmc, she doesn't deserve to be one and she certainly doesn't deserve colt. Logan unfortunately is not the loyal type, and it soon becomes clear to Colt that despite having a girlfriend, Logan likes to play the field. His girlfriend Ash is very much unaware, and it’s only when her and Colt start spending more time around each other does she start to suspect and put two and two together. Story line 0/5- wish the author didn’t drag the story. She could have focused on the trust issues Ash had after her breakup and try to make a character arch for her. The story felt like the author was running to the finish line and trying to tell us how in love the couple is. Nothing was built up. Nothing. YOU NEVER SAY THE OTHER PERSON'S INSECURITIES AND FAILURES EVEN IF YOURE TOO ANGRY AT THEM, it just shows how you've been raised up, tho ive no doubt seeing her parents aren't that stable themselves either, but no it's his decision anyway why are you getting in between.

You lost her because you refused to treat her the way she deserves. That’s on you. Not me. And now that she’s mine, there is nothing that will take her away from me. Nothing. Do you understand me? And if you don’t keep your bruised ego out of our relationship, I’ll ruin your pretty little face beyond repair. We clear?”the FL is the epitome of ~not like other girls~. i can't put into words how cringy it is, so let me just slap a direct quote from this abomination in here: Kelsie Rae is one of my all time favourite authors. Ever since I read her ‘Advantage Play’ series I have been hooked. So when I heard she was releasing ‘Don’t Let Me Fall’, I knew I was desperate to read it. The beginning of the book consisted of poorly written “tension” between Colt and our Sunshine heroine- who is a “not like other girls” and is beautiful without knowing it.

like how come a person doesn't know their partner is cheating on them, she only understood that logan was cheating on her AFTER he sent her a breakup message like bffr rn. i know that this is a fictional book and not necessarily representative of the author's own views, and i know that men talk about women like this in real life, but it's still irritating. i doubt that ANYONE reading a romance book like this is doing so for their daily dose of realistic misogyny. Hated that none of the boys (specifically colt and Theo) went up to Logan and told him not to be a cheater? Like he’s being an asshole and cheater, but colt and Theo are completely fine with letting him do that? Especially colt who was cheated on?? And they’re calling Logan their best friend??? I know if one of my best friends were a cheater, I would call them out on that shit. It also pissed me off that Colt was calling Logan one of his best friends, yet was purposely messing around with his “best friend’s” girlfriend (and there weren’t any scenes that made them seem like best friends at all).I get that its hard to believe that the “love of your life” I might be cheating on you, but it sounded like her entire relationship (esp the last 6 months) she was settling for such mediocre presence. This is a sweet romantic read, and Rae always ensures she gives her readers a believable relationship which you cannot help but become obsessed with. I absolutely adored Colt and Ash, and the way in which Rae writes completely had me hooked. Only part of the book I slightly enjoyed was the surprise that Colt is actually a bit of a sweet boyfriend.